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Turnabout is fair play
Especially as the crimes he committed are now being perpetrated upon him. And to think that he might still have been free, if he just kept to himself and didn't attack Mary.
Except when she sat on his face?
He did what anyone would do, under the circumstances. He bit her and ripped a huge chunk of flesh from her, causing her to lose control, jump up screaming and bleeding. Which is when he jumped up, took control and got away. The end to poorly thought out garbage.
Submission had occurred
I thought the reason he didn't "bite her" as the other guy said or whatever was because she already had him totally submitted. I thought the way he went from aggressor to complying without needing to be forced made it sexier.
Thanks***
For the read.
"Movie star"?
There were no movie stars in the 1800s. I don't know if English is your first language, but if so, your spelling and punctuation are very poor. Please get an editor.
love this!
Great twist!
my all time favorite
Wow. Loved it. You've created a dark hero in an ordinary everyday character. It has the surprise of a pleasant twist. She is a Django of her own struggle, effortlessly able to turn an oppressor into a notch on her belt and i applaud you, author. I like your writing style and this entire work you have submitted.
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