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Faith and Lust

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/19/14

Not exactly erotic and the writing is rough around the edges

But otherwise, the irony and twist at the end made this rather intriguing to read. It's just a shame that the story isn't as fleshed out as it could've been. The potential is there.

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by Anonymous12/22/14

I'm surprised she's considering suicide - as a nun, Maria should know suicide is a mortal sin. She has other choices - I hope she takes another one.

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by DGA200012/25/14

Highly stylized

I really liked the dialogue driven style of the story. I will check for more stories from this author.

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