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"Knock knock". "Who's there?"
Nobody. And that's who is reading this mess. Should have ended after chapter 2. Complete drivel. Look at the descending number of views and the poor scores. You get the idea. UGH!
Anonymous
Boy, I think it's hilarious when someone leaves a comment like that anonymously. First off, it must not have been drivel or you wouldn't still be reading this series. Secondly, who cares what the numbers of views or stars are as long as there is at least one reader out there who finds interest in a story line. If you don't like the series, then stop reading. That will give those of us who are enjoying the story to be able to read it in peace without the commentary of anonymous people who try to belittle an author's work. Finally, your comment is neither constructive criticism nor encouragement to the author, so comments like that should be kept unwritten.
To LoudPet
*smiles*
Ignore the anonymous idiot. I am enjoying the world and characters you have created. Longer chapters are always appreciated, but I know that life's demands can sometimes dictate the length and frequency of chapters.
I am curious to see whether her brother escapes Elios's house and how injured both men will be by the end of their scuffle. And I'm very interested in seeing how Elios will react to finding Ami missing. You also have my curiosity peaked concerning Ami's father and where he is sending Martha. *grins* As you can probably tell, I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great writing.
I like this....
Just wish the chapters were a bit longer. Hope chapter 11 is on its way. :)
mystery man
No detail of his face? Is he going to be a new love interest? I thought that guy was joseph? ? Joseph got burned?
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