A Strange Arrangement Ch. 08

My heart is actually hurting.

Such a beautiful well written story. Thank you. I desperately await the next chapter.

Great reading....

This just keeps getting better

Just an all around great read

Let's hope the light in the end of the dark tunnel of this story is not a train. A really great chapter. The dates really helped showcase how much they already care about each other compared to other shallow people. Great element to get the point across.

I cried when Andrew told Gina how his wife and baby died. You described the scene so beautifully horrifying the aspects of her last breath, her last cry. I got goosebumps reading that particular part. Hope to see more chapters and I so wish Gina opens up to Andrew, that guy deserves it. Best of luck.

The relationship is really evolving . I like how you are developing both of their personalities into a cohesive storyline . Looking forward to the next chapter .
Great writing !

update

Wow this story is really too good of a quality for this site first time ever I continued to read after busting all my nuts . UP DATE SO ON! !!!

Really dramatic

The characters are fascinating. The storyline is as we expected. I am wondering if Penny might be stuck in that asylum and if his guard duty might be self-imposed punishment.

Emotional connection

Gina shows her first real emotional tie to Andrew...and runs. Well okay she tells him to leave. I just wanted her to cuddle with him and strengthen their bond, but of course she is not able to. Not yet anyway. I hope that changes for her. Just have to keep reading!

Bawled.

I freakin bawled while reading what happened to Noel.
My little girl is napping beside me, and that exact situation is my biggest fear 😭

I'm wondering the same bruce22. I've been interested enough to keep following, but this chapter you really set the Hook! Brilliant Writing! Headed to the next chapter now.