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Another home run!
Your writings flow like your other stories; looking forward to the rest of the series. Ben and Wendy are sure to bring much pleasure to your many readers. Keep up the good work.
Good start
Quite a few women have benefited from relationship with a more mature man. they are established and patient with no game playing.
Working on part 2 but I have a question
I wrote easily the first half of part two but now am wondering about a 'small' detail.
I gave Ben a long but thin cock in memory of an unexpected lover. His cock was long and the head was prominent but even when it was erect, it was thin - I could easily grasp it fully with plenty of room left over between my fingers.
I was always a bit bothered by the shape and feel of his erections but I decided to incorporate that detail into this story. It's made me wonder though, if I'm unique in my feelings toward thinner cocks. Does the thickness of a man's cock make a difference to other women? I would love to hear any thoughts on this topic.
With the holidays over I can get back to the story and hope to submit it soon. Thanks for reading.
Off to an amazing start!!
As a "new" reader to your stories, I am enjoying this one very much. Of course, the sex is exciting, but I am also enjoying the tenderness and intimacy that this story describes. As for your concerns about Ben's anatomy, I believe you writing that he has a "long, thinnish penis" would be fine, as far as I'm concerned. I grow tiresome of stories where the man's penis is "massive, 10 inch, round as a Coke can," etc. This story has a more intimate and loving vibe to it and is therefore, to me, more life like. While Ben's "package" is important, as a woman, I feel like that it really isn't the main focus. I feel that longer, thinnish penises are very are attractive, just as some men with shorter, fatter penises. Your stories are amazing and I know we'll enjoy Part 2, regardless as to how you proceed.
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