Thanks for the comment. This is actually a scene from what I hope will be an ebook that I changed to the second person because I'd seen quite a bit of that on Wordpress.com and wanted to give it a try.
Nice to know that it's not everyone's cup of tea (beer?)
I stopped as soon as I read YOU, "I" didn't do anything! I detest stories that try to make out I DID anything.
Thanks, Anonymous!
Thanks for the comment. This is actually a scene from what I hope will be an ebook that I changed to the second person because I'd seen quite a bit of that on Wordpress.com and wanted to give it a try.
Nice to know that it's not everyone's cup of tea (beer?)
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