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EXCELLENT
That was another very well written story.
whore is just that
Are there no men left? No real love? Its a as if forest Gump is the author.
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Your story is too "usual" and plain. Work more on a plot and characters next time, less on sex. Good luck.
Ignore the trolls…
I liked your story. It made me very hot and wet, and you captured the curiosity, exploration and nervousness of first lesbian well. Please write a second chapter.
Reminds me of my first time with a girl
You captured the feeling of the first time with a woman so well! I'd definitely read a sequel to this :) The only part I didn't like is that she was married. I prefer these stories without the deception.
Very....OK!
Well, that was certainly straightforward; not bad, but could have been better with a little more preparatory plotting and drama. Still, enjoyable.
Very nice...
very hot. While I personally enjoy more panty play...licking and sucking my lovers pussy through her silky thong, still made me incredibly wet and brought me to a strong, wet orgasm. I agree with other comments, write more.
wifes close friend.
my wife is bi&so is her friend.i am the only one who knows it.it dosent hurt anything&they put a good show on for me once&a while.we are good friends&close.they have multi orgasms.they just did it in front of me.they go wild when I watch it does something to them inside when I watch.then at the end my treat is I get to join in.the sweat really runs off of them.we are happy with our private secret.
the neighbor's "hot"!
This was a totally "hot" story that kept my woody hard!!
Very excellent
Nicely done. Great buildup anticipating ... Connecting
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