To quote When Harry Met Sally, "I'll have what she's having." And does Master have a brother?
Well written, Alice. Technically clean and wonderfully descriptive without purple prose. Even better than giving us the fly-on-the-wall sense of observing, you give us a seemless opportunity to step into these roles vicariously. Brava.
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Talk about descriptive!
That's some fine writing!
Excellent story-telling!
What is there to say, except for 'Thank you, and please have five stars.'?
Well done -- more please!
To quote When Harry Met Sally, "I'll have what she's having." And does Master have a brother?
Well written, Alice. Technically clean and wonderfully descriptive without purple prose. Even better than giving us the fly-on-the-wall sense of observing, you give us a seemless opportunity to step into these roles vicariously. Brava.
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