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Interesting ending
In some ways this story was disturbing, but in others it really played to my own fantasies of dominance where my submissive is willing to do anything for obedience. But of course I always step in to keep her safe. In many ways this story hits me more than any other story I have read here, but in others it scares me the most as well. Does that make any sense?
Thanks
It does make sense. The idea was to explore some of my darkest fantasies, which I find both arousing and horrifying. So I'm glad I managed to convey that in some way. Thank you for your comment - it's always great to receive a reader's feedback.
Having been recently enthralled by your work, I was surprised to see this exert. I was drawn to not only the passion of need for oblivion and servitude, but the clinical way in which you described each detail.
I just feel there was so much more than could have been done with this. I do hope you'll consider fleshing out the points in between. Other than that, the work was impressive to say the least. It was captivating on a non-sexual level. I look forward to seeing more from you.
Thank you
Thank you for your kind message. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. May I ask what "points in between" you would like to see fleshed out?
Amazing!
This work is wonderful. It was arousing, interesting, emotional. I really connected to Anna and I was always eager to know what would happen to her next. I'm so glad the story ended well for them both. Not only was this story what brought me to literotica, but it has awakened me to my own sexuality and submissive desires. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.!
Thanks!
Thank you for your feedback. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.
frightening
well written .
intriguing & interesting plot.
engaging protagonists.
truly remakable.
extremely disturbing
Thank you
Thank you. You're very kind.
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