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The Amazons Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/19/14

great start

Intruiging plot that has grabbed my attention...I like your style.
Looking forward to part 2!

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by Shike12/19/14

Very very interesting.

This is a very good start. It really grabbed my attention. My only request would be longer chapters. :) Otherwise please, please, please continue this story.

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by Anonymous12/19/14

Intruiging

Well done although a bit on the short side it was well written and so, so hot. Please continue soon. Five stars

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by gr3ywind12/20/14

Got me curious

It could've done with a meaty backstory because we don't know much about the main character to get properly invested. But I'm curious where this is heading...

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I'm in

Now I want to know who "ME" is! And if I had to gander based on your user name "ME" was once a man and is now transgender. Inquiring minds want to know - so waiting for chapter 2.

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by Anonymous12/20/14

More

That's it...you have to give us more.

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by Anonymous12/24/14

Yes!

I'm very intrigued ! More please and soon!!

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by Anonymous06/19/16

Where's the rest omg this was so good I loved plz finish!!!

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