Kisses, Handcuffs and You

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Too short to win my sympathy. And the sentences are too abrupt, making all story sound 'rough'. In short, you need more practice.
Keep writing.

An excellent start and it begs for a sequel. The first step is the hardest; you've done that, now go from strength to strength!

Thanks for your feedback!

Simplyme99, thanks for the support!

Aurimaz, thank you for your comments! You actually dislike what I actually meant for the daydream to sound like! So although you didn't like it, my feelings of nervousness, my brain firing in all directions, the emotional and physical roughness of the lead-up and the in-the-moment-daydream came through. Later installments will flow easier, so check back later! And truly, thank you for your constructive comments!!! :)