What were you thinking? The real question is what was I thinking.
I hoped that this would be the cuck figuring out that he is in a loveless marriage where neither partner is in love with the other. There doesn't appear to be any real emotional connection between the husband and wife.
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Anonymous12/20/14
pathetic question
You can't think, you are brain dead if you allow all of that. Kick her out and find a better woman. Let her bull work and provide for her. You think it will last?
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Anonymous12/20/14
Only a blubbering fool thinks or posts suce garbage...
In other words, standard Literotica fare. Most of the decent authors have fled this site.
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Anonymous12/20/14
1*
A new good baboon
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Anonymous12/20/14
Sick
You are SICK. This guy is not a man. He is a pussy. Literotica needs a new category for this type of story.
...How about letting us have some fun as well? Write a nice little story about an internet-writer who finally realizes he has no pride, no self-esteem, no qualities whatsoever and decides to shoot himself. By the way: Do not forget to wear a dress...
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Anonymous12/20/14
Just Turn Gay or Become A Eunuch!
This type of bullshit has to come from a female's perspective. NO real heterosexual man that loves his woman could ever do any of this shit and if the idiot does any friend that finds out should assist in his suicide as he is no longer a "MAN".
Until this or some other real man takes her from you. You will find women really dont want this, they want a guy to make them feel secure and loved this or some guy who really likes her and grows to love her will take her away from these adolescent shenanigans
I gave this story one star not for its content (which I find non-erotic and better suited for the Fetish category), but for the way it is written. This reads like a newsletter -- not a story. Regardless of whether you get excited about stories of humiliation and belittlement, this just isn't a good story, and there is nothing erotic about it.
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Anonymous12/20/14
gave it a 1*
Not to piss anybody off, but in my opinion, that's all it's worth. LMAO at anonymous trying to piss off anonymous with an anonymous post. Get a life BT2. Your score is meaningless.
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Anonymous12/20/14
Just strap an IED to your self . . .,
wait for the bull to be back in the saddle with his bitch, then join them on the bed for one final bang. Put a lot of people, mostly distressed readers, out of their misery!
Apparently my life experience doesn't live up to your expectations. Pathetic how someone is so weak they have to post criticism anonymously. Sad really. Go live out your own experiences then write about it, rather than pretend to be a literary critic. Oh, and by the way. My wife and I are extremely close, open and honest with each other. This is all roll playing and consensual and if it is too much for you to handle there are sites designed for nursery rhymes which should be more suited for you little mind.
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Anonymous12/22/14
Author
Stick this in Fetish and you avoid the negativity.Just because a couple are married does not make a story LW's. If not grow a thick skin and get used to being bashed regardless of whether its role playing,fantasy or reality.Just a fact. Read the reactions to other stories like this.As they say it is what it is.
I'm not bothered by any stretch. I'm not able to change the category after the posting.
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Anonymous12/22/14
Author
All.evidence to the contrary based on your previous rant.Just saying......
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Anonymous12/22/14
WACC
. @hotwifeclw
" Pathetic how someone is so weak they have to post criticism anonymously. "
And you somehow think your handle is less anonymous than anonymous? Post your real name and adress along with full face photos in your bio if you aren't trying to hide your identity...
" My wife and I are extremely close, open and honest with each other. This is all roll playing and consensual"
Be that as it may, you're sick and your wife isn't very loving as she enables your sickness (or you hers). What kind of woman gets all pissed off because her hubby had a bad accident and she's just pissed because that interferes with her getting off. Gad... With a friend or lover like that who needs enemies...
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Anonymous12/24/14
Crap
not a good thing about it
actually it is very boring and totaly un sexy
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Anonymous01/10/15
"What Was I Thinking?" Yes, what you're thinking?
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Anonymous01/11/15
" Pathetic how someone is so weak they have to post criticism anonymously. "
Hey man! This is PORN, everything is PATHETIC and RISIBLE with PORN so to ask someone to write a comment under his real name (in a world that better remains anonymous) is a bit pathetic too. Just let's have fun and don't put a thought in something that it is what it is. With all the misogyny, homophobia, narcissism, flawless characters, parochialism and much more that is in porn you ask for constructive comments? In PORN? Really?
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Anonymous01/11/15
"...This type of bullshit has to come from a female's perspective. NO real heterosexual man that loves his woman could ever do any of this shit and if the idiot does any friend that finds out should assist in his suicide as he is no longer a "MAN"..."
My goodness! You are worst than the guy you criticize. In which age you live, man (no capital letter)? READ A BOOK Sir! Or better, get an education!
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Anonymous01/25/15
I don't think you were thinking.
And I think the low score was indicative of that fact. Can this poor guy even stand up with a spine made of jello? What was he getting out of this but demeaned, degraded and humiliated. Just awful.
What Was I Thinking?
You weren't. Hope you enjoy your future chastity. Moron.
another trash writer - please stop
if what you wrote about yourself is true - your hubby can better shoot himself - or better - you. What a waste of his life.....
What were you thinking? The real question is what was I thinking.
I hoped that this would be the cuck figuring out that he is in a loveless marriage where neither partner is in love with the other. There doesn't appear to be any real emotional connection between the husband and wife.
pathetic question
You can't think, you are brain dead if you allow all of that. Kick her out and find a better woman. Let her bull work and provide for her. You think it will last?
Only a blubbering fool thinks or posts suce garbage...
In other words, standard Literotica fare. Most of the decent authors have fled this site.
1*
A new good baboon
Sick
You are SICK. This guy is not a man. He is a pussy. Literotica needs a new category for this type of story.
Not very good
Read this again and sort out your mistakes.
Yeah, I bet it is fun...
...How about letting us have some fun as well? Write a nice little story about an internet-writer who finally realizes he has no pride, no self-esteem, no qualities whatsoever and decides to shoot himself. By the way: Do not forget to wear a dress...
Just Turn Gay or Become A Eunuch!
This type of bullshit has to come from a female's perspective. NO real heterosexual man that loves his woman could ever do any of this shit and if the idiot does any friend that finds out should assist in his suicide as he is no longer a "MAN".
I Thought Tbey Abolished Slavery
Not good claw.1* for fetish driven drivel.
Another Sick Pillock
Another example of a pathetic wimp.
Based on The Title of This Mess
Obviously not much.
Have fun!
Until this or some other real man takes her from you. You will find women really dont want this, they want a guy to make them feel secure and loved this or some guy who really likes her and grows to love her will take her away from these adolescent shenanigans
PATHETIC!
One star
I gave this story one star not for its content (which I find non-erotic and better suited for the Fetish category), but for the way it is written. This reads like a newsletter -- not a story. Regardless of whether you get excited about stories of humiliation and belittlement, this just isn't a good story, and there is nothing erotic about it.
gave it a 1*
Not to piss anybody off, but in my opinion, that's all it's worth. LMAO at anonymous trying to piss off anonymous with an anonymous post. Get a life BT2. Your score is meaningless.
Just strap an IED to your self . . .,
wait for the bull to be back in the saddle with his bitch, then join them on the bed for one final bang. Put a lot of people, mostly distressed readers, out of their misery!
Less than 1*...
Less than 1*...Not for the story (?) but because it's a bad writing, and one small page its difficult to read and to understand...
Oh, look, folks!
The same dork troll made multiple comments.
You Must Be a Literary Genius
Apparently my life experience doesn't live up to your expectations. Pathetic how someone is so weak they have to post criticism anonymously. Sad really. Go live out your own experiences then write about it, rather than pretend to be a literary critic. Oh, and by the way. My wife and I are extremely close, open and honest with each other. This is all roll playing and consensual and if it is too much for you to handle there are sites designed for nursery rhymes which should be more suited for you little mind.
Author
Stick this in Fetish and you avoid the negativity.Just because a couple are married does not make a story LW's. If not grow a thick skin and get used to being bashed regardless of whether its role playing,fantasy or reality.Just a fact. Read the reactions to other stories like this.As they say it is what it is.
Not offended at all
I'm not bothered by any stretch. I'm not able to change the category after the posting.
Author
All.evidence to the contrary based on your previous rant.Just saying......
WACC
. @hotwifeclw
" Pathetic how someone is so weak they have to post criticism anonymously. "
And you somehow think your handle is less anonymous than anonymous? Post your real name and adress along with full face photos in your bio if you aren't trying to hide your identity...
" My wife and I are extremely close, open and honest with each other. This is all roll playing and consensual"
Be that as it may, you're sick and your wife isn't very loving as she enables your sickness (or you hers). What kind of woman gets all pissed off because her hubby had a bad accident and she's just pissed because that interferes with her getting off. Gad... With a friend or lover like that who needs enemies...
Crap
not a good thing about it
actually it is very boring and totaly un sexy
"What Was I Thinking?" Yes, what you're thinking?
" Pathetic how someone is so weak they have to post criticism anonymously. "
Hey man! This is PORN, everything is PATHETIC and RISIBLE with PORN so to ask someone to write a comment under his real name (in a world that better remains anonymous) is a bit pathetic too. Just let's have fun and don't put a thought in something that it is what it is. With all the misogyny, homophobia, narcissism, flawless characters, parochialism and much more that is in porn you ask for constructive comments? In PORN? Really?
"...This type of bullshit has to come from a female's perspective. NO real heterosexual man that loves his woman could ever do any of this shit and if the idiot does any friend that finds out should assist in his suicide as he is no longer a "MAN"..."
My goodness! You are worst than the guy you criticize. In which age you live, man (no capital letter)? READ A BOOK Sir! Or better, get an education!
I don't think you were thinking.
And I think the low score was indicative of that fact. Can this poor guy even stand up with a spine made of jello? What was he getting out of this but demeaned, degraded and humiliated. Just awful.
I THINK-----I THOUGHT
so far this has been a very bad idea. TK U MLJ LV NV
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