Sounds to me like you had nine holes in ones! Time for the back nine?
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Anonymous12/21/14
Too unattractive
Sorry, but I stopped reading when you talked about how downright ugly your wife was. Not every story needs to have a porn-star perfect female in it, but I might have kept going if you'd described her as "plump and on the plain side," or something similar.
Admittedly I was a bit put off by your description of your wife, but in the end I think you found an even more appreciative view of your wife.
You also seem to find a new way for your wife and yourself to enjoy one another in the throes of passion.
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Golfing
Sounds to me like you had nine holes in ones! Time for the back nine?
Too unattractive
Sorry, but I stopped reading when you talked about how downright ugly your wife was. Not every story needs to have a porn-star perfect female in it, but I might have kept going if you'd described her as "plump and on the plain side," or something similar.
Explorative risk
Admittedly I was a bit put off by your description of your wife, but in the end I think you found an even more appreciative view of your wife.
You also seem to find a new way for your wife and yourself to enjoy one another in the throes of passion.
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