by JDecker
It made me smile and I bet you had fun writing it. I love authors with a sense of humor, self distance, and excessive use of commas. Five stars!
I first read this story YEARS ago, and it has stuck with me ever since for reasons I can't quite nail down. I really like hair stuff, so it might be all the emphasis on hair, it might be the humour, I don't know. All I can say, is excellent, memorable story. Well done.