A Week

GREAT START!!!!!! I'm ready for chapter 2

I Likey

I like the story already! I love a good office love/hate story! I'm also in love with your other story so update that one soon too!

Please update this every day instead of week. Give us a real week!!

Wyatt should know that she shouldn't let an enemy bait her and let them see they got under her skin. But I guess it couldn't be helped.

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love everything you write babe! Keep it up, please lol.

Predictable crap!!

I knew from the title that this story would insult my intelligence. Firstly the writer lacks any imagination ( like most authors on here) for some reason the main characters are always lawyers or teachers & mob bosses. No imagination or creativity!! Then you make simple spelling mistakes. I know at this point I should stop reading but I try to give you a chance so I read on. Only to find that your clearly struggling to be creative with words to make your story have some substance - so I stopped reading by the time I got to the fifth paragraph!!!

So tired of reading about fucking lawyer characters, can't any of you writers on this site come up with a different career for your characters, there are thousands to choose from.

It was good.

Don't listen to the haters. This story is very interesting and well written. Good details. Just don't disappear for 8 months and come back and write chapter 2. Good luck!

A Great Start!

I am very interested in this story. I was laughing all the way through this first chapter and I can't wait for more. It's been a long time for me since I read a really good story on here. Please post again soon.

I love the competition and hidden lust factor, I hope to read more soon. Merry Christmas :D

Good start!

I like your story, and I hope to read more chapters. Forget the Haters!

I love it

I don't wanthink to wait for the rest lol I absolutely love it

Thanks Bunches!

Hi everyone thanks so much for your feedback , I really enjoyed reading most of it & look forward to it in the future! Anonymous it seemed like you posted 3 or 4 comments back to back; for future reference just make an account and email me! The story is already created so if you hate lawyers then no need to read any further. And if I never mentioned this before let me make this loud & clear: I have no editor & do this purely for fun! I'm young & in college so if I'm not completely wasted off my ass or cramming for tests then I will occasionally write a story or two. So if spelling errors like then vs. than piss you off weeeeell whenever you see a post by May_I please skip! I would hate for anyone to go into an uncontrollable rage from my grammatical errors. Anyways thanks loves & for those of you who enjoy don't be strangers message me! =D

can't wait to read more. great job

Can't wait for more. Great job

Promising...!! :)

I like this ...

Next chapter please;)

LMAO

Love your story and love your comment May. If there were professional writers up here we would be paying for these stories. I for one appreciate them and hope you don't get discouraged. Ignore the trolls, there is a difference between critiquing a story and just ranting.
I love your story and really hope to hear more.