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WOW!
You gotta really be bad to warrant nothing but "1's" !
Yeah, this is a typical very sick LW author.
They crawl out of their cess pool, post, and then crawl back in.
Questions
I am curiouse 99.99% of these cuck authors why can not write the long time perspective (5-10-20-30 years) of these cuck marriages? Is it the reason in the majority of the long term cuck marriages the husbands are bisexuals or homos?
1*
(Xleglover is one of the very few exceptions...)
The majority of the sexual majority male readers do not feel these time sections (some hours-some days-some weeks, but the some weeks stories are very very few) stories to be erotic or interesting. Some sexual majority male readers who are/were bulls or cheater husbands who remember to their past with the hot wives of the cuckold pairs they could imagine a cuck story to be erotic with the POV of the bull. But the POVs of these cuck stories are either of the POV of the hot wives or the POV of the cuckold. So these stories are erotic for a minority only and after almost similar 15000 cuckold stories in LW are not INTERESTING for the majority of the readers, so these stories good to give 1* without reading the all stories (except the first and last paragraphs, because perhaps the cuck finds his balls in a good twist.....).
OR IS IT PUT ON A HAPPY FACE
its Serendipity. TK U MLJ LV NV
Amusing
This is nicely comedic and would make quite a good sketch for a risque cartoon. Not sure it's erotic so perhaps it would be better placed in another category.
What is missing is any feeling or characterisation. As it is impossible to know the characters, there can be little to empathise with and so no ongoing engagement.
funny but very sick
1
got to at least smile
for this one... good bar room tale
No
Faith is belief in something to which there is no direct evidence. He has evidence if he wants it. He does not want it.
That is not faith, that is denial.
It would be the same as if the Jewish religion said they had 'God in a Box' with the Ark of the Covenant, they found the thing and they refused to open it up to see God.
This is a quibble; a point which was incorrectly made. Seems he needs better friends.
Friends?
These guys are suppose to be his friends? He's a fucking pussy, there'd be a lot of milk cartons with missing pictures on em over here.
Yes, Faith is a funny thing
You believe something that someone you think you can trust tells you even though the evidence is contrary.
Re: They crawl out of their cess pool, post, and then crawl back in.
Sounds more like you, you fucking turd.
Weird and interesting piece. 3*
Like a dog returning to it's vomit...
Vile stuff (even worse- boring stuff) like this gets spewed all over the floor and cuck readers lap it up.
Congratulations! Gold, silver and bronze in the moron Olympics.
The author wrote a truly vile story that make less sense as it progressed.
Too bad, because I wanted to like it.
Faith one thing...stupidity another...
Faith is one serious thing...stupidity another different thing. This story is bad because not one of the people in it is a normal human being. 1st - The friends were all like animals chasing a female dog in heat; 2nd - The wife was really a female dog, a bitch in heat, a whore; 3rd - The husband couldn't be more stupid, it looks like he was retarded, worst he looks like an insult to retarded people...Less than 1*...But in the last day of the year we couldn't wait for a good story. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL READERS AND WRITERS OF LW!!!
This is vile, disgusting stuff and that says a lot about the author to be honest!
Enjoyed the read.
Beyond stupid
1* 'cause it reduces your overall average
piece of shit.
Writer and his sick story, what rock did you maggots crawl from, this site is now just for fags and perverts.
unknowing cuck
Read a good one like this a long time ago. Slightly humorous. Hubby was watching his wife get it right in front of him (under covers), but believed the guy was just trying to rub her back / crack her back. They were just "playing", "faking" and the hubby, who must have been quite dim, never did catch on.
Would have been a kicker if hubby came home to discover wife lying in bed with copious amounts of warm white goo on her belly and breasts. New skin lotion? Edible too! Hubby should lick it all up!
Another day wife returns to pool party with face covered completely in warm white goo, dripping onto her bikini clad breasts. It's that edible skin lotion again! Thinking himself the 'sharky' one hubby licks up every thick gob in front of the whole party. Being theatrical licking the clumpy strands off the top of her breasts. Listen to everyone's cheering (jeering?) Phone camera's recording all over!
This could be a nice little light comedy. Continuing adventures of the brutally cucked but clueless.
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