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While the Girlfriend's Upstairs

byGreat_Pharaoh©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/23/14

hmmm...

Based on the character names and the numerous grammatical errors, I presume that English us not your first language.

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by Anonymous12/23/14

Hot!!!!

Mmmm! That was hot. I love how good of a friend Zaire is to Imani. Plus their descriptions are too sexy.
The sex scene between them was hot.
Can we get a sequel?

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by Anonymous12/24/14

Nice...

A good little friends turn lovers story. Things got pretty steamy between those two, I hope we can see the aftermath of this.

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by Anonymous12/24/14

WOT

SUPER SMASH BROS ISNT ON PS3 U FAG

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by Anonymous12/24/14

Sequel???

C'mon, GP...you've gotta give us a sequel. Imani wants some more of Zaire and I'm feeling Zaire's not gonna give up making love to his girl. ;)
Please give us a sequel...please.

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by Anonymous12/26/14

Name

Holy shit.. My name really is Imani

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by Anonymous12/27/14

Gay much?

After everything that happened in the story, all that anonymous fag could think of was that SUPER SMASH BROS is not on PS3. Lol

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by Anonymous12/27/14

Next

Friends or friends and lovers?

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by Anonymous12/28/14

Sweet

A sweet story, let's get some more with these two, huh?
Imani wants Zee...and even though he's gotta girlfriend, I'm feeling that Zaire wants her too.

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by Tallygirl101/21/15

My first time...

Reading one of your stories: Awesome! On to the next...

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by Anonymous03/24/15

Nice

Very good story and very detailed!!

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by Anonymous07/15/15

Omg.

I read THE WHOLE THING IN MATERS VOICE FROM CARS
SWEET JESUS WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME. XD
I-I IM DYIN. XD

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