lots of females wind up pregnant after the bonfires
mostly things there have gotten more family friendly compared to years ago
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Anonymous12/27/14
I agree
a lot of Fun can be had by all... I remember my first bonfire with a large group... one couple hooked up in a van close to the fire.. I thought the van was going to flip over with all the action going on the inside... thanks for the memories
The ending surprised me - most writers would have simply had Jerome and Shawn take turns fucking the semi-conscious Ellen whilst her doped husband gazed glassily on - but it does pave the way for a more trusting, open and sexy foursome in your next chapter.
A good story always gives us three doors: one, truth; one fiction; and one somewhere in between. So many stories here lose it with fake dialog. Others with poorly painted backdrops they consider scenarios. But you, sir (or madam), have succeeded in giving us a good story, with the credibility meter registering well over 80%, leaving us to ponder which of three doors? For it is in taking the story with us, having read it, that you truly succeed. So let's see some more, ok?
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lots of females wind up pregnant after the bonfires
mostly things there have gotten more family friendly compared to years ago
I agree
a lot of Fun can be had by all... I remember my first bonfire with a large group... one couple hooked up in a van close to the fire.. I thought the van was going to flip over with all the action going on the inside... thanks for the memories
I liked the story! Fiction, fact, or somewhere in-between, I hope you keep it up!
I enjoyed the read.
The ending surprised me - most writers would have simply had Jerome and Shawn take turns fucking the semi-conscious Ellen whilst her doped husband gazed glassily on - but it does pave the way for a more trusting, open and sexy foursome in your next chapter.
The Lady or the Tiger?
A good story always gives us three doors: one, truth; one fiction; and one somewhere in between. So many stories here lose it with fake dialog. Others with poorly painted backdrops they consider scenarios. But you, sir (or madam), have succeeded in giving us a good story, with the credibility meter registering well over 80%, leaving us to ponder which of three doors? For it is in taking the story with us, having read it, that you truly succeed. So let's see some more, ok?
Not a bad story...except for...
Not a bad story...except for the drugs...Drugs send any story to the drain...
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