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Elevator Arousal

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by daddy195012/24/14

First story?

Good start Claire.

Like your writing style, however one small error: 'and begins fingering myself' Substitute 'me' for 'myself.'

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by tabbymidnite12/24/14

Nice dream

Keep writing that was a fun read and also very arousing.

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by betrayedbylove01/08/15

Oh Yeah

That was great. I laughed my ass off.

Five Stars

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