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The Transformation Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/25/14

Please MOAR!

Looking good so far, can't wait for more. ;)

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by jpz007ahren12/25/14

Vaccines, eh?

Something tells me that what the survivors have might be different from the original thing. Just my 2c

Nice story. And your ending does beg for a Ch. 02

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by joshmose12/26/14

nice

More please. A nice lead in and an interesting set up.

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by Anonymous12/26/14

Don't you dare

Stop writing this story. Keep it coming!

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by Anonymous12/26/14

More please !

More is needed!

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by Anonymous12/27/14

Love it

Cant wait for more. Love where it's going.

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