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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/25/14

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by Anonymous12/25/14

You have some potential!

You have some potential but need advice on punctuation. Run-on sentences, etc. distract me.

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by Averygoodlay12/25/14

I liked it

Not just a sex story but one of life and one I can relate to.

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by chytown12/25/14

Thanks***

For sharing.

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by Anonymous12/26/14

it is what it is

Good story

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by shadowduster12/26/14

Good read

finely got back with a heating wife

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