I really liked this story. Creative and hot fantasy. It isn't quite complete enough to give it 5 stars but I'd give it 4 1/2 if I could. Add a little background on the main character, clean up some editing and you're there.
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Anonymous12/26/14
It's ok...
Everything Is great but some of the stuff like blindfolded is not ok
English
Very nice too!
er -- you couldn't PM me the details of this hotel, I suppose? Great stuff, well done -- five stars a huge TY and Xmas hugs.
A Good One
I really liked this story. Creative and hot fantasy. It isn't quite complete enough to give it 5 stars but I'd give it 4 1/2 if I could. Add a little background on the main character, clean up some editing and you're there.
It's ok...
Everything Is great but some of the stuff like blindfolded is not ok
so much for
honouring her wishes and boundaries.
Yummy
All the aspects are there. Very nicely held my attention right to the end.
More please!
Kinky as heck! I like this fantasy very much!
Excellent
Rhonda,
That was very smoking HOT.
Very good, really enjoyed masturbating to it.
Very GOOD !
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