Hey! I'm always loving your stories, man and this was no exception. Great stuff 'cause 'saying goodbye' is hard to do sometimes. :)
On the fence with this one.
Absolutely loved it! No series needed. Leave it, how it ended. Great story. Thank you.
Most of your stories have a cheating theme to them. Is this going to be a constant theme?
Not trying to be a grammar Nazi, but please, fix your punctuation.
To the people saying get an editor. I have tried on numerous occassions to get an editor. But have not got a response back so its not for a lack of trying. Thanks for reading through.
Gotta agree with Pharaoh here bro. Nice one, and if you're still looking for an editor, hit me up.
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Hey! I'm always loving your stories, man and this was no exception. Great stuff 'cause 'saying goodbye' is hard to do sometimes. :)
On the fence with this one.
Loved it!
Absolutely loved it! No series needed. Leave it, how it ended. Great story. Thank you.
cheating
Most of your stories have a cheating theme to them. Is this going to be a constant theme?
Nice Grammar
Not trying to be a grammar Nazi, but please, fix your punctuation.
Have Tried
To the people saying get an editor. I have tried on numerous occassions to get an editor. But have not got a response back so its not for a lack of trying. Thanks for reading through.
Yup
Gotta agree with Pharaoh here bro. Nice one, and if you're still looking for an editor, hit me up.
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