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not kissing your ass...
...but you could give a seminar on how to tell a story! Even though I had my suspicions about Ian being gay (not taking the hints), I was still surprised at the revelation. AMAZING! Than to insert Gina into the story, WOW!!!
Amazing
I am amazed at your storytelling talent. I was happy to see you planned to continue the stories of all your characters, and can't believe I missed this giant clue. Looking forward to see what else is coming.
Damn it! That's it!
You're one helluva writer!!! There's this unexplainable charm you add to your characters that makes us super fucking drawn to it... damn, chapter 1, little action, so many convos, BUT FREAKING TEARS POOLING IN THE CORNERS OF MY EYES.
You're good. Just too good.
-Rita xx
Four beautiful children 😍❤️
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