The Slippery Slope

1 star

If true you are nothing but a whore. Get an abortion so you don't bring a bastard child into this world. And then give your husband a divorce so he can find someone way better than you.

1*

Why?

why not confess to both the other spouses and arrange a group fuck? I don't have a problem with you "cheating" its just sex isn't it?

Fuck all the naysayers

I enjoyed your story thank you so much for writing it. Please write again. I gave you five stars. People bitch about how bad this is but this happens in real life everyday. By the standards of society it is not right but fuck society. You should not judge people just accept them for how they are. We all have dirty little secrets that others would look down on if they knew. One out of every five men is raising a child that they do not know is not theirs. So this is not that uncommon so stop the moral outrage. Sincerely M

re: Fuck all the naysayers

So, only YOU are allowed to comment, only people who heap lavish praise on story no matter what?

No, fuck all assholes who can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion. Ya like it? Fine. By all means feel that way.

"You should not judge people just accept them for how they are. "

How about following your own advice, hypocrite? YOU are the one who's judging people.

I gave you a # 1

And fuck all you people that say (Fuck all the naysayers) LoL what a joke. The story sucked.

Great Story

This is a great story. I love the development of the main character. You are a good writer. Keep writing, please! Don't mind the trolls. The more trolls you attract the better the story. Think of them as sort of an inverse measure of your stories success.
I'm looking forward to more of your stories.

good first time

As far as the story writing goes it's good. If it relly is a true account then i am not surprised either because many a talented person throughout history have also been disloyal, unfaithful, self centered, selfish individuals who wear their bages of infidelty proudly. Who publicly claim to love someone at the same time they privately prove they dont.

Well written story but......

Why would this person want to be married? Cut hubby loose and move on.BTW go fuck yourself goldenballs.Yours the only opinion that counts faggot? Don't think so nitwit.

re: fuck all the naysayers

Wow, how ironic that poster seems to show more concern for your feelings then you feel for your husbands.

Whore

1*-now all you real "trolls"can moan about it. You know who you are, the ones that whine about other comments. Get a fucking life assholes.

goldenballs?

A fitting name for a troll. Always whining and moaning about other readers. Guys like that don't know the meaning of the word "erotica", the fucking sickos.
I think, I'll write a sequel to this story, where hubby finds out about his bitch wife and tosses her slut ass out the door. Would any of you pricks that think this is erotic read it?

yikes

Why would this slut be married, she has no love or respect for anyone, including herself. What a pig.

re: Great Story

Right. People comment on the story, you spend most of your comments trashing them for having a different opinion, and THEY'RE the trolls? On what fucking planet?

he was snooping on her laptop

found a file from before she met and married her husband. and he wants to blackmail her? He is the one who she be blackballed from the family. But by her going along with it we found out just how stupid and loyal to her husband she really is.
what is the old phrase? oh yea,
stupid is as stupid does.
bad premise, poorly constructed, no satisfactory resolution.

Yet another stupid wife!

Note she was one who brought up making a deal so to my way of thinking she was just seeking an opportunity. Taking it bareback triples the betrayal and we can only root for her husband to not be any form of cuck. I guess my problem is that I rejected the idea of blackmail being valid as described and so did not find anything positive or attractive in the protagonist.

Well done for a first try but in LW you have a problem that there are many different opinions on what is acceptable....

liked it

Could have spent more on why you quickly submitted to him, but overall, hot

What a joke

Just another slut wife story. Hope Jeff finds out soon before he raises another mans kid.

3*s

Good enough for now.
Needs more character development. More emotional connection for Lisa and her husband. Along with Chris and Jeff. Lets not forget between the sisters. Unfortunately, you have already moved the story to fast and too far forward. Or maybe you can salvage it.

This could be very painful. But not for the reader if we are not invested in the characters's life.

I can hate the story or I can love it. Both are good results. The worse is I don't care!!
Gave you3*s for encouragement.



AMerryMan

Been there, done that.

You nee Id to tell Jeff. And here is why. I have been on this roller coaster. My youngest son looked nothing like me. My two older sons looked great deal like me. And the strange thing is my third son did not look like my wife either! It took me a while, and a blood test, to figure out that my youngest boy was not mine. Do you have any idea how that makes the average, rational, sincere male feel? Especially after he has made an emotional investment into the child?

Well, it ruined our marriage! We were divorced six months later and I never saw that child again. And you know one? I do not miss it. But, I have not been able to really trust a woman since.

If what you are telling us is even partially true, this character needs to tell Jeff. It is one thing to be cuckolded it is worse to raise a doppelgänger. I cannot think of anything worse than being a cuckold and raising another person's child!

In this story, you really need to have "Chris" come clean and let the chips fall where they may. Remember, there are consequences in life to everything we do.

I agree with chagrined

The husband has the right to make an informed choice. Once they said I do, he has the right to expect faithfulness. He has the right to expect that all children that his wife bears are sired by him, and has the right to test them and reject one who isn't his.

just a story

you all realize that this is a fiction story site, correct?

personally, i'd love to be her. fucking day and night and then getting a big cock on the side? oh yes please

WHORE

WHORE SLUT hope you are caught .

Good story

I liked it and especially the added spice the bro-in-law was older. Don't be put off by the negative comments which as you can tell are frequently written by the mentally unstable. My only criticism is next or similar stories be longer.

Great Story!

Great story Chris! Don't let the nay-sayers get you down here. Just laugh at the ones who criticize you for your actions. They are online reading literary porn yet want to judge you and your morals? I'm sure they are not on Literotica looking for recipes or Bible verses. Then there are the ones who want to criticize or critique your writing like they're freaking literary geniuses. Just ignore them and keep on writing. The ones who call you vulgar names; delete their comments. It's not worth your time and energy worrying about. Please keep writing. I really enjoyed the story and the family member twist! I gave it a five!

She wasn't hard to convince.....

....since most blackmail attempts that weak would have been answered with a laugh. Then as soon as it got out, squashing it and suing the blackmailer would cause him far more harm than he could do to her. It was too scant an excuse, so she must have been ready to cheat.
Several perceptual breaks (making parts feel kind of....bumpy) and needing more character/relationship development to be truly intriguing.
Frankly, I found it a little shallow, but still a turn-on.
Not far in their future, these two are going to have several very bad days....life altering days..because they both thought with their gonads instead of their higher minds and we're arrogant, stupid and careless.

Congrats

Your knocked up. Good for you. Now only if your cuckold knew what was happening, there would be no problem. But since he does not know, well, you will have to live with it. Well you and your stud brother in law. Oh well, if you had been truthful at the beginning, all would have been fine now. Just saying.

The one thing good about this is religion

Because if your ass was Muslim and it was found out, both you and your brother-in-law would get what you deserved: beheaded or stoned to death.I opt for stoning personally.

Wonderful

I agree completely with FillLindaUp. Excellent, well-written story. I too love the bro-in law aspect, and the older man. Would love to read a continuation of this story, but look forward to others too.

Extremely weak blackmail attempt

There is no need to blackmail a dumb slut, why wasn't she on birth control pills ? The story overall is bad enough such that it never should have been submitted.