My Brother, My Lover Ch. 08

words

You need to learn the difference between "your" (possessive) and "you're" (verb, you are) -- your essays are full of that error.

Also, you confuse "furry" (covered with fur) vs. "fury" (as in raging anger).

Otherwise, I love the way you think.

getting better, but....

unless the four will actually end up in the same bed, its too much like a soap opera

I like it

I like your story a lot. I like the characters and the situation. The pace is good and it has come together well. I just wish you would stop using "Bro". I want to scream every time you write it. I don't know anyone whole calls anyone bro! Thanks

Great story, but i think it could end with an unhappy ending, or a great ending

My first read of brother and sister incest.

I had to mark this story as my favorite because it was so hot and being my first I had nothing to compare it to. What I loved about this story was that it was not about hard raw sex, but about a brother and sister really being in love with each other.

Yes, Nathan and Callie should go at each other a few times a day so that David and Rebecca cannot break them up. If they try different things and get so horny for each other and get each other off so strong; then they cannot be broken apart. Cannot wait for another chapter. 2 great people in love. Thanks.