I really liked your story. It was sweet and fresh and kind. It also had good pacing and was very well written. Thank you.
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Anonymous01/30/15
Lovely little tale but...
...try to avoid anachronisms in fantasy tales---the word 'autopilot' jarred simply because it is an ill-placed concept in this story. Apart from that, very good.
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Sweet
Quick, quiet and kind.
Very nice. Please feel free to continue the story or write more of your imaginings.
Lovely.
As a male, octopus-women have turned me on as well. Maybe one of her sisters can rescue a man.
Lovely Story
I really liked your story. It was sweet and fresh and kind. It also had good pacing and was very well written. Thank you.
Lovely little tale but...
...try to avoid anachronisms in fantasy tales---the word 'autopilot' jarred simply because it is an ill-placed concept in this story. Apart from that, very good.
Great!
Well, great start anyway. Seems like all you really did is set the scene then stop just as the main part of the tale is starting. Still, solid 4 stars
loved it
Only problem was i want MORE!! Lol 5 stars
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