All Comments on 'Breaking and Entering'

It could have been a whole lot better

I hated the storyteller more and more as I read but that didn't stop me from getting really hot. But I don't know about the ending. Why did the victim lie about him, and is she the red haired girl whose apartment he's watching?

Writer uses a unique follow-up to his other rape story. I like it!

i got nothing

a bit longer and i'd have cum myself!

Ho-lee... just... yeah. So I was sitting here looking for a quick read. Gah! Why did I pick this one? You scared the bejeezus out of me. hahaha This character is one sick mofo. But she... liked it? Got off on it? Wanted to go with him? Left her window open for him?? WTH?! I'm not sure which of the two of them is scarier now. lol I loved his descriptions of the two women. Very visual. Do I dare read the 2nd part? Oh God. haha *shaking my head*