All Comments on 'The Mission of the Heart Ch. 04'

At long last, I so much enjoyed this series. At least am happy Charlie n 76 met each other again, but you broke a tiny heart with the erasing thingy. It's has been a Very touching, nice story. Hope to see n read another spy stories from you. Thank you 4 sharing. Great job

Love love love love love love love love it.......The sacrifice of love touched my heart......

It was bittersweet, but I'm so glad you finished it.

Sigh. So sad and satisfying at the same time. The story really could have been taken to the next level if you'd used an editor. English is clearly not your first language and your use of it was both charming and really distracting. Thanks for sharing the story - and keep writing!

Wow. That was totally unexpected. It's endings like this which make me smile. The author did an amazing job with the story. Its the information that you withhold from the story which gives it an entrancement. I was just amazed and surprised, while feeling really sad for Carrie. There was a sense of fulfillment that developed within me in knowing that she was willing to let her love go and watch whilst she fell in love with a new person. Nice one!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for finishing the story. Loved the twist. I'm so glad you found the time to finish this.

Some errors here and there, but nonetheless, great story. One of the best series on the site. I love your style of writing and it's always nice to see a submission that can stand alone as a story.

Hope we see more of your work!

Thanks been waiting for this can`t even think how long,but with much appreciation thank you for giving us a nice ending.considered as you Christmas and New year gift to us.likewise I do wish you a good long healthy and prosperous life onwards.Bless you always.CINDER

I am a YoursTruly101 follower!! I absolutely love this story. It has been an emotional rollercoaster of action, suspense, happiness, sadness, disgust...all the marking of a good story by a good author. Must all good things end...what about this "lifetime" for Agent 76 & Charlie as their love reunites. Plus the skills they learned (fighting, shooting, etc) were developed when they were young, so they should still be there. They're just untapped for now. In short, can we see these two characters again and what about Carrie. I want her to find love too. She deserves it after all the sacrifices she's made.

A big thank you to the author, and all the best in med school and life. xoxo

Awesome story throughout the development. The ending was a surprise to find out that Carrie and 76 had a relationship prior. I kept wishing that they would get together with how Charlie treated her. How about a prequel for your fans with Carrie and Charlie 😁 for your followers? Thanks for your creative art in storytelling.

Listen...just...keep going. Like, this story is AMAZING and while nothing will be lost by leaving it just how it is, its just...I don't want to stop reading it :(. I'm in love with everyone in this story and I'm sure I'm not the only one who would love to see what happens with Anna and Ashley, or Carrie find a new love. We know you have school and all but just...think about it..pleassssee?

I love this story any follow up chapter in Figthing for love????

As an avid Sam Fisher (from Splinter Cell) Nikita, Dark Angel and a little bit of a James Bond fan, I thought about it and maybe I can write a prequel for Seventy-six and Carrie, but I'm not sure when it will be released because the following months might be hell-ish for me. Nevertheless, it's very tempting because I would love to tell their forgotten history and some of the previous missions Seventy-six went through.

I'll keep you guys posted and hope to release maybe mid-february or March, but it won't take another four years for me to write haha. Thanks guys, love you!

I like the idea of a prequel. sounds great!

But please don't forget to update the other story, Fighting For Her. I'm eagerly waiting for it to be continued. Love you too! :)

Thank u..I thought you will never get to finished this story.I love how u put a lot of twist and unpredicted storyline..although charlie and agent 76 deserves 2nd chances to continue their love stoy..but I deeply felt carrie's character most in understanding what really love means..but overall this is a great story..

Carrie and agent 76 shipper^.^ hoping for a next chap.^.^

Again I'm gonna save the link,in case of any updates.Thank u and write more stories..Love from Kat-philippines

I really loved this series and would for you to write another

I reread again immediately after finished 1st time. I love chapter 1, 3 & 4. My heart also goes out to Carrie. She deserves happiness too. Thanks for finishing this story!

I loved the story and would love if you continued it in some way

Can you please write some more stories please😭

all the elements. intrigue, suspense, pathos and a bittersweet ending. Thank you.

loved it, but felt really terrible for carrie in the end.

I don't think I've ever read a more intriguing love story with twists and turns throughout in any sort of context, nonetheless Literotica. I was choking up all throughout this final chapter. Well done

EPIC..

Enuff said

This is officially my favorite story on here I absolutely loved it it made me cry so much!! Ugh I'm still crying! Anyway thank you so much!!!! Oh and your amazing talent for writing is greatly appreciated!!

Truly amazing! It's sad it had to end! Thank you!

Oh god! I just gotta say that this is a realy beautiful story. I love how you describe the characters and i just love the whole story. It had a pretty good ending, even thought i was crying when i read about all the things that had happend in their past

I'm crying like happy and sad tears. I'm a mess god damn it, this was really good.

WOW! I'm lost for words.

This story is amazing, it had a happy ending but i couldn't help but feel crushed for Carrie.

A pool of emotions, going back to the past i could not stop crying.

This storie will stay with me forever.

Thank you soo much for this beautiful experience.

Really great storyline that kept me I'm the edge of my seat!

Wowww!!! I never thought I could ever have this mix of emotions that I feel right now just by reading your amazing work! For me it's beyond perfect! The feeling of frustration, thrill, excitement, heartache, happiness, sadness, confusion, anger and the ummmm arousal *giggles* .. All jam-packed in that story! Please.. Please.. Pretty pretty please.. Hurry up with your next stories!!

And please I wanna know what happened between her and that Ashley girl before too.. You think I skipped that part?! Ha!! There must have been something especial with her too or you wouldn't name seventy six after her name!?? Hahaha.. ! Can't wait!!

Loved it!!!!!

I liked the story, but someone needed to proofread it. Spelling and grammar were so bad they were distracting!

It's so amazing. I...I'm speechless. Speechless.

I couldn't stop reading it was amazing. Please could you write a sequel from Carrie's point of view? I think that would be epic!!!!

oh my god this story is so good. i totally did not expect that plot twist at all damn. and the ending is so bittersweet :( i'm happy agent 76 and charlie ended up together but at the same time i feel so sad for carrie :( but thank you so much for writing and sharing this. it's honestly one of the best stories i've ever read 💓💓

Excelent story. It was a roller coaster of emotion and high packed action. It's like you grabbing my throat and forcing me to read.it... I could not stop. This is talent. Your story needs editing, but apart from that its endearing and catching. As for your characters I am sorry for Carrie, I feel she was the one who really loved Pamela, from begining to end. Keep the good work!

Knocked me for six and I'm so pissed it's over...

Such unbelievable storytelling - words fail me.

Please, please keep writing and fuck the editing comments

Damn, damn, damn, how am I going to read anyone else's prose after that - thank you for sharing.

Fuck me..... you can write a story. Wow. The drama, The love, The emotion. Loved this series & The prequel . Both excellent. I just wanted too go on & on. Hope u write more soon.

I read the prequels first before reading this series, so I was already introduced to the characters. This is such a wonderful story, such interesting characters, plot, and the all powerful love and destiny. The stories are so great that I read the two Agent prequels and the Mission of the Heart series in one day. Hope to continue reading fantastic work of yours.

This is in my top three stories I have read on this site. The amount of emotions it contains and evokes is amazing. The biggest thing that gets me in this story is the trauma that 76 goes through. She in the end has 5-10 years worth of memories taken from her and results in her having two loves taken from her. Although in the end she seems to have a love for Charlie, it made me think how she never had any hint of love for Carrie which makes me think. Maybe I'm thinking too literal. Anyways though this story truly is a work of art.

One of the best story what I’ve read. Pure love. Thank you!

I could read your stories all day. You could write this as a novel for a publisher. I read both the prequel and this series. You easily could make this into a series of books.

I am sad that 76 had to have her memories wiped. But I hope that you write more about her, Charlie, and Carrie. You are a remarkable story teller. Keep it up.

I was only looking for a quick read but then I fell in a rabbit whole with this series :)

My only beef with it is, 385 days is not 2years. It's barely a year and a month. 2years would've been .... 730 days if my math is correct

I read the 2 prequels first before reading this series. I shipped 76 and Carrie more than 76 and Charlie. I mean, Carrie was 76 first love and all and they should be together in the end :( Carrie really sacrificed a lot for 76 and she saved her life multiple times.

I hope you write again soon! Really like how your mind works on making stories that goes straight to the readers heart.

I feel sad for all of them. All they've sacrificed for the Agency and in the end is wiping all that memory away. Everything. They live on not knowing who they were or what they went through.. Just thrown away like trash. Seems such a waste. So glad Pam and Charlie met again. They swore to find each other and they did just that.