All Comments on 'Last Christmas'

I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.

But it was what you would have expected with not much suspense,

For the read.

That is such a bad ' romance' I gave it 4* !

I an LMAO ROF as

AMerryMan

Really and truly very!

Good job. Simple and easy read.

Plot idea is good, but the execution, dialogue, and imagination are shallow or missing. Not a lot here to get real excited about. Her betrayal didn't make much since, unless we just accept that he fell in love with a heartless bitch. And how close could they have been if she developed a second love life to the point of marriage, with him having no clue? She misses Christmas lunch and he's not immediately on the phone or at her house to find out what's going on? His parents knew a week ago but she didn't tell him? All to implausible to be interesting.

But too short and by-the-numbers.

Just bad. And Wham lyrics? You deserve negative stars.

How about Queen's "Another One Bites the Dust" as the title for a sequel? ~ Seriously though,I really liked this short,but full story. Nice to see the good guy come out on top! Well done!

Good decision, the deception she carried out for a year was consciously made. That sort of treachery cannot be lived with

Pleased he wasn't daft enough to go back to Katherine.