All Comments on 'Dad's Undies'

I wrote 'Great start' because it's crying out for a continuation.

I am begging you for a continuation. I couldn't help but touch myself to this piece. Great work.

This story made me very horny. I liked very much that the girl rubbed her dad's y-fronts on her pussy... very hot! I beg you to write other chapters, thank you very much.

dad's shorts and how she loves them...this story made me a kind of horny and hard ... ( and if I was a girl I probably would have a wet moist pussy )... But you should have gone into more detail, described your masterbating in much more detail.

Keep writing but think of how you can do better on you would want to be aroused as if you wear the reader jacking off or jazzing one's pussy ( figa )!

Giovanni

A good story but a little short and moved to quick a little rushed. Thank you for a good story I hope you will make another.