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Just stop writing, if you can't be bothered using proper grammar, punctuation and spelling, not to mention posting LONGER chapters there's no point. You have juvenile writing at best and seriously need an editor. It comes across like a 5 year old writing it.
Don't stop writing jus learn the proper way. You idea is good and Um a writet myself and I don't mind offering my help. Just look at my page. I also edit.
wow
Someone needs to take chill pill, who put a gun to your head, if you don't like it don't read it , no need for abuse. Thanks for the chapter dont listen to bitter and spitefullness.
I love it please make more asap 😍
Please make more 😍😍💯
umm Tre, they have these things called phones and they can be used when no one is around! he's acting like a dick. candi needed to get rid of Jacob and romeo should take his own advice and find someone who respects him a bit more. Why would he want jacob, who choked the guy he loves, to stay in his home? ridiculous. sorry, but trey is coming across really poorly.
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