Poorly written with lots of grammar mistakes. Must try harder hence the low score for what could have been a lot better.
Many mistakes!
you need an editor. The grammar, typos and mis-spellings take away from the story
Quite a few young guys have similar feelings and emotions. Some moms like to tease son and friends and know they jo for them, they enjoy it.
Like telking the end of a story fist to prevent a strong climactic finish.
Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to future submissions.
Really short, but whats here is fuckin HOT!! Going to read the fist part now.
A true incest story NOT in incest.
I hope you aren't like every body ! I hope you will write the ending !!!!!!
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Could do with an Editor.
Poorly written with lots of grammar mistakes. Must try harder hence the low score for what could have been a lot better.
Agree
Many mistakes!
distracting
you need an editor. The grammar, typos and mis-spellings take away from the story
Good ideas
Quite a few young guys have similar feelings and emotions. Some moms like to tease son and friends and know they jo for them, they enjoy it.
nothing
Like telking the end of a story fist to prevent a strong climactic finish.
Good Read***
Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to future submissions.
Short but?
Really short, but whats here is fuckin HOT!! Going to read the fist part now.
Wow!!
A true incest story NOT in incest.
3 rd......
I hope you aren't like every body ! I hope you will write the ending !!!!!!
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