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The Boys and the Moms in Mexico

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/30/14

Could do with an Editor.

Poorly written with lots of grammar mistakes. Must try harder hence the low score for what could have been a lot better.

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by Prfsr12/30/14

Agree

Many mistakes!

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by Anonymous12/30/14

distracting

you need an editor. The grammar, typos and mis-spellings take away from the story

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by Anonymous12/30/14

Good ideas

Quite a few young guys have similar feelings and emotions. Some moms like to tease son and friends and know they jo for them, they enjoy it.

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by Anonymous12/31/14

nothing

Like telking the end of a story fist to prevent a strong climactic finish.

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by chytown12/31/14

Good Read***

Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to future submissions.

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by dirtyoman01/02/15

Short but?

Really short, but whats here is fuckin HOT!! Going to read the fist part now.

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by johnstang201/03/15

Wow!!

A true incest story NOT in incest.

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by Anonymous02/06/15

3 rd......

I hope you aren't like every body ! I hope you will write the ending !!!!!!

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by DebbieX06/23/15

Very Distracting

Sadly, it's written with lots of grammar mistakes which distract the rader. The story could have been a lot better had you used an editor. The grammar, typos and miss-spellings take away from the story

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