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by ramonbrook12/29/14

I would have given it a 5

If there was some character build up! But felt I didn't know enough about the situation! Is she married? Did she meet him somewhere recently? Is she dating this guy?

WHO ARE THEY? Gave it a 4*

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by Anonymous12/30/14

lost

I have never commented on a story before. However, this story just simply does not flow. She was sucking her doms cock when, in the very next sentence she has a ball gag in. Makes no sense!

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by Anonymous12/31/14

Good potential

Agree with the other comments that the scene shifts are a bit abrupt, and makes the reader temporarily lose his/her place, but the Giant man and the woman characters are interesting, based on their dialogue and actions. Would love to read more about this couple.

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