At first I was like whoaaaaa! Where the hell does this story start and then I remembered reading the first part of the story.... that is if its the same story I was thinking about... any way great job!
i am looking forward to more
I can most definitely see this unfolding into a nice story. Wonderful writing. Strong interesting first chapter.
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I enjoyed it!
At first I was like whoaaaaa! Where the hell does this story start and then I remembered reading the first part of the story.... that is if its the same story I was thinking about... any way great job!
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i am looking forward to more
Wow!!!
I can most definitely see this unfolding into a nice story.
Wonderful writing.
Strong interesting first chapter.
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