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I have a complaint.
Love the storyline, but I'd also love to see longer chapters. I'm anxious to find out what else your characters are going to do. Looking forward to the next installment.
Progressing nicely
As in the previous 5 chapters, great content with great delivery. There's always great sex and also a great story. On the subject of short chapters; I don't have much time to read so a single page chapter is ideal for me, it makes it easier to keep up with what's happening. No matter what, we still have to wait (squirming with anticipation) for the next chapter. 5 stars and fave story, thanks again for such a great series and we greatly anticipate more.
Regards, max052
I'm not sure where you're going with this
I mean, I know where things are headed, what I can’t figure out is your route. Primarily, it’s the whole secrecy bit. It makes no sense.
Everyone is has had some sexual contact with someone else. If someone was being left, out, I could see being delicate about how to bring that person around. Since she’s a novice, I can see still being that way with Pixie. The rest? Uh uh.
You have Sarah state "So I guess you don't hate me or dad for what I did, huh?"
See seems to be really afraid of what he’ll do and say. She needed reassurance and comfort. The logical response was to tell her about him and their mother, to show her she’s not alone, that he’s been doing the same thing. Sure, he tells her he loves her, but his actions speak differently. Keeping secret about something for which there is no good reason to be secret isn’t an act of love, it’s of control. He’s playing her.
Before the videos, yeah, there was a reason, but the vids destroyed that. If there something in his father’s background that would make airing what has been happening between everyone problematic, I could see a reason, but you’ve given nothing.
You’re using obstacles where they are not needed. It’s just padding.
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