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Ah a story of real people
This story gives me hope for the future stories coming on here. This is a story of a mature (not chronologically necessarily) writer confident in her skills and views of the world. That world shown here is complicated, hurtful, promising, joyful, ecstatic, painful all swirling around. It shows that people who act outside of the judo-Christian rules can follow the Golden Rule better and more lovingly than those who do the judging from that book religion. It showed how hard it is to allow the blinders of one's beliefs to fall away so that ones that are more useful in living a loving, compassionate life can become the guiding principles. Loved the story. Wish I could rate the series higher than a five. Just wow.
More excellent work from Tara
A great story that demonstrated that a marriage should be an equal partnership. Sadly, here, neither party seemed to recognise that until too late.
deserves a higher score
very well written , only the occasional typo , and nothing glaring that detracted from the reading experience .
totaly enthralling & engaging , entertaining & interesting .
a most remarkable series ,
mixed feelings as to whether i would like to read more chapters.
the place the story currently ends seems so perfect in so many ways .
and yet at the same time the quality of the writing & way the Author has shaped the tale to this point has me wanting to read more & see what choices Eleanor makes as a result of her sudden awakening.
xxxhugsxxx
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