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ready for more!
ready for more :)
Classic scenario!
And very hot, 4 stars! Thanks for the great writing! Hope to see more soon
The story is great, but you need an editor
I really enjoyed the story - it's a scenario that lots of us would love to be in! Nice slow build up, and lots of possibilities for the future.
Having said that, it was hard to read. You need to think about your tenses much more carefully. Sometimes it's in the present, sometimes in the past (and often in the same sentence). I suggest finding an editor to review your language use - it'll make your stories even better.
Thanks for the feedback
any and all feedback is welcome.
For part 2 I will try to have an editor look at it before submitting
Great story
It don't get any better than finding a girl that makes you wear her panties, wank's you off in a pair of her panties then wears them. Then takes you to the mall to shop for panties for you to wear. A five star story, waiting for more!
Good start
Quite a few guys have done similar things. The consequences of getting caught vary but usually are not good.
The answer is no.
End of stupidity.
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