My First Time with a Man!

you dont have to continue it....it sucked

Feeble

Hope this is a one-off.

Needs a lot of polish

Seems strange to comment on a lack of proper editing on erotica, but editing would have helped readability and an enjoyment factor

Good as a commentary about what seemed to really happen...not so much stroke stroy

As the title says, this is OK as a commentary about what appears to be a true story. My first time with a man was very similar, although I did get the cock in my ass too, and I have gone on looking for more. I do hope this was meant to be something to just share the experience with others, because as that, it works well.

"Softie" not unusual

As someone who's bi and played MM and MWM many times, I never had any problems staying hard when there was a woman there but once in awhile did when only me and another guy. With a woman in the mix it's dynamite, so many possibilities to explore.

It's not surprising you weren't hard through some of this encounter - it was your first time and you'll have been nervous. The more you do this stuff, the more you'll be relaxed and your body will be turned on naturally. Also, you'll find probably won't be hard when you're fucked. Somehow the centre of your sexuality will shift to your anus not your cock. You'll see this a lot in gay porn. So don't worry! It seems this man was a good lover - I'd give him a second, and third, chance before dumping him.