A Strip Club Plan

stupid wimp story

It started interesting but deviated into nonsense. Seems we need a category for such pathetic stories as she is no loving wife.

Erotic?

No!!!!!

OK whatever honey

Go fuck everybody here, but get real good at your new job.
Because there is no way in heaven or hell that I will ever touch you again.
I'm leaving now, never come back, or be prepared to die.

And Now?

Well, that was one hell of a way to end a marriage. And on his birthday. Wow, he didn't see that coming. Or does she still have one more present waiting for her husband at home? Like maybe a cuck cage. As the author, you could actually make a story out of this.

Another let down...

What is with the penchant for humiliation? Literotica is overrun with man hating men and women and women hating women and men. The whole need to humiliate others is sick, pathalogical and the powers that be at Literoctica seem to love this kind of shit.

I ask again are there other websites where loving wives actually love their husbands and aren't peopled by those whose desire seems to be emasculate husbands. I need to find another venue as these cuck stories appeal to a very minor percentage of the population.

I have noticed that the quality of writing overall has plummeted in the few months that i've frequented here. Certainly the mental stability and morality of the writers and commenters reflects a real sickness.

More garbage

What could anyone find interesting or entertaining about getting demeaned, degraded and humiliated by their wife? Stupidity runs amok. This was awful.

@seekeraz

Exactly my idea ,Loving Wife has become a place where people can vent theyr frustrations , it's all about variations on the same theme , slut wifes ,cheating ,humiliation ,revenge,nothing or close to nothing about the wifes who spent theyr life on educating children,cooking ,cleaning ,organising a household,we all know that cheating exists ,not only wifes but allso husbands are active in this ocupation but are they the big majority ? i don't think so,when i see plots that start with "strange cars in driveways" and "sex in the marital bed " i want to actually throw up,then there is the unprotected sex ,getting pregnant by a lover ,jees people nobody these days is really that stupid or they would have to be morons and yet most storys are about smart ,educated middle class americans

gave it a 5 to

say happy new year and to piss off dear annony!

Agree with @seekeraz and dyonysos...

Agree with @seekeraz and dyonysos...They seem in love but that was a lie...Soon they seem to really hate each other, and show no feelings for each other. As soon as she said :"I'll always be a black cock slut now.I can't wait until you shoot your load in me and make me a real black cock slut.", he should know that their marriage was over, he should have left and then divorce her...

Happy...

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL READERS AND WRITERS OF LW.

re: gave it a 5 to

"say happy new year and to piss off dear annony!"

You posted this to piss off yourself? That must be it since you posted this anonymously and therefore ARE annony.

If you were referring to someone else, see how easy it is to copy the subject line and aim the comment directly to the other person. So, either way, you really, really, really fucking stupid.

Great first submission!!!

I would have liked more details to make the story longer. You could carry it on to a second chapter, to why was she seemingly mad at hubby when it was his birthday present. Was she really converted to being a black cock slut, or was she just teasing. I like conflict between husband and wife in these situations. Send them back to the club, and let the MILF wife fuck all who could get it up for her.
5 *'s
Happy New Year to all on LW!!!

Went from a hot story to a dud when you decided the wife had to be a bitch, which you did with intent and purpose.

Past your prime?

You're past a lot of things including the ability to write. Pure garbage! 1*

Good enough

Here's a married couple who enjoy winding each other up. They won't split up just yet.

I think this was sent in just to piss people off.

Not erotic, made no sense, just a hate story, and I did hate it, good job, but never again will I read your bile, bitch.

It was ok up to a point

Well the match made in heaven is about to fall apart. Why? The "cruelness" and the lack of communication. Waiting on chapter 2 to read all about the divorce. So so writing. 1 star for another bitch slut and cuckold in the making content.

ugly story.

Ugly people, not erotic, just ugly.

re: re: gave it a 5 to

Nah, that's just bonnietaylor2 shooting off her mouth anonymously to try to piss of anonymous readers. She's better known as the "troll" of loving wives. Pay no attention to her, she's just trying to be herself. She gives 5* scores to every story, regardless if it's any good or not, hoping to upset somebody. Laughable.

Well...

...that sure escalated in a hurry! You had such a nice story going, and had me hooked. Then it quickly veered off the rails and became a gonzo cartoon fantasy!

As a gonzo cartoon fantasy, it works for me. Job well done.

Feedback?

Those of you who gave constructive feedback on my first story, thank you. I've always wonder I long to make these (how much background, etc) to hook the reader but at the same time, arouse.

If it was not your thing, please move on to something that works for you. Some people like Star Trek, others like Love Stories - both like movies.

He knows he was set up so just dump her the next day and let her know what a whore pig she acted like and the divorce papers would be done in a few days

cuck love

I loved it.

If he's not a cucky boy.....

.....he'll put paid to his wife's threat and have her served and dumped as soon as possible.
This was unusual for a cuck story, because it was a set-up and not willing. She's asking to get dumped, or she would have acted more the wife and less the independent contractor.

FTDS - One For You Bro....

This is crying out for a part 2. Why did the wife turn what could have been hot wonderful SHARED birthday experience into such a humiliating and awful experience for her husband?? Didn't say a word on the way home?? Something is definitely wrong here, I am sad to say. Lose a * for that. Ken

Part 2 will follow

For those who have asked, a Part II will follow. Unlike my regular writing I go with the flow as I am writing erotic work and of course it is based on my mood at the time.

So far just another WACC story...

Some birthday present.... Does hubby grow a pair and packs a bag and leaves? Or hatches a complex BTB plan? Or goes full submissive cuckyboy? Or plots his own revenge to fuck the girls in front of his slut wife. Wifey says "whatever the girls do" is ok" then gets pissed off when he gets fucked and cucks hubby with two black guys? Hardly a loving wife. Just a bitch slut. She's concerned about hubby with younger women so to solidify her marriage she fucks two black studs. (which had to be paid to do her...). That will do the trick.

Well written. Enjoyed the first half of the tale. Didn't particularly care for the second half although the dislike had nothing to do with the writing.

Story could have been just a bit longer. I like short offerings, but the here the brevity caused it to be abrupt; a literature "wham, bam, and screw the thank-you ma'am."

Another Cunt Wife!

Kick the cunt to the curb and look for a younger model ! She set the whole thing up and now that she's fucked black cock the husband will be a sorry-assed cuckold! Another wimpy husband bites the dust!

Another author with no name for "the wife."

You start the story one direction then abandon it to make it a cuckold story. Not good.

Reminds me of me

Love the story

Shes a conniving cunt,

WTF

This was her idea right????? Something smells very fissssshy.

as below

cuck story about a wimp man. TK

Wish

Sara is the kind of wife you wish on your worst enemy.

It started as an erotic story with the wife telling him anything the girls are comfortable doing with him, she is FINE with.

"In the car she again stressed that tonight was a present for me and that "whatever the girls do" is ok."

She expressly gave the consent.

So then when it happens she turns into a disrespectful, dishonourable, HATEFUL , SPITEFUL cheating cunt!

Tormenting and humiliating him after.

What the fuck happened?

She needs her arse kicked, divorced. What she did was over the top hateful.

Was this wrote by 2 people? With the second one not even reading the first part?