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by Ashesh912/30/14

Tess : perhaps the 8th line should read ---

"& wakes all others as they lay "?
Excellent as always : 5-ed .

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by todski2801/01/15

interesting piece

Have missed your work around here :)

You drive a frenetic pack here that is just tempered by the punctuation. It to me reads like a witches incantation your use of ING words to rhyme and run your start rhythm worked well as if each ing is onomatopoeia for a ringing bell to toll the end.

5ed but I echo ash's question also
Thanks for the read

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by demure10101/13/15

Very nice -

Some lines remind me of The Raven.

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