Is this supposed to be erotic, or just a step by step set of instructions? There's more to a good story than just a list of events.
Reading a technical manual might be more interesting than this mess.
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Is this supposed to be erotic, or just a step by step set of instructions?
There's more to a good story than just a list of events.
Well this was ugly
Reading a technical manual might be more interesting than this mess.
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Back to One Starry Night or
More submissions by th3jok3r.