This has promise, but I would have preferred more. I'd liked to have read about how Carmen's husband was the lucky benefactor of Carmen's horniness after watching the photoshoot.
intriguing short .
the sleight of hand with photographer/husband is maybe going to be too subtle for many of the readers ... personaly i thought it was sublime.
without using hard drugs like cocaine, don't write the story at all. Because of the blatant use of drugs on someone who was already probably drugged out, I would give this story -100*, I don't care how good or bad the writing was. I didn't finish the story due to the drug use and I doubt that I will ever read another of this writers stories.
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Too Short
This has promise, but I would have preferred more. I'd liked to have read about how Carmen's husband was the lucky benefactor of Carmen's horniness after watching the photoshoot.
Interesting little story. Nicely written.
delicious.
intriguing short .
the sleight of hand with photographer/husband is maybe going to be too subtle for many of the readers ... personaly i thought it was sublime.
xxxhugsxxx
TwistedOliver.
If You Can't Write A Story
without using hard drugs like cocaine, don't write the story at all. Because of the blatant use of drugs on someone who was already probably drugged out, I would give this story -100*, I don't care how good or bad the writing was. I didn't finish the story due to the drug use and I doubt that I will ever read another of this writers stories.
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