This was a nice change of pace from the previous story...
And I hope the next one is even nicer when Gareth's balls get cut off by Dottie and Andrew... Just saying... ;)
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Anonymous01/02/15
Didn't see that coming! You deserve more than five stars really, REALLY
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Anonymous01/04/15
So there was a gaping possibility.....
Love this series!!!
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Anonymous01/07/15
Gina and Andrew baby announcement!
Please write a story about Gina telling Andrew the news about the new baby. I love that couple. I felt cheated in Chapter 12 - it went too fast. Like it tied up a bunch of loose ends too quickly. Their passion is magnetic. I wanted more! Lol
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Anonymous03/30/15
Very emotional and dramatic, even if Alex's paternity was pretty obvious.
Unfortunately, it appears Ian dying was best for everyone, maybe even Ian. You would think Dessi would have told Rick and Alex about Ian by now, why not? Both men know Rick is not his biodad. I would think Dessi would want Rick and Alex to know that Alex was conceived in love, and that biodad is absent from his life only by accident, not malice or desertion.
And a réal faux pax from Gina, telling anyone before Andrew that she is pregnant is disrespectful and careless. Gina's character is still acting kind of selfish and stupid.
A good read overall. Thank You.
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Anonymous04/11/15
Just didn't get this one
Maybe it's me, but something just didn't work for me in this story. Dessi gave birth to Ian's son, she knew where his parents lived but didn't tell them? For 18 years? No matter that she didn't like them, or that they were so emotionally distant, she should have told them they had a grandson. Then, she tells Gina and it's like, "Oh before you leave, you should know you have a nephew. Have a nice drive home." And how does Gina react? She shares a slightly dirty joke with Dessi and drives off. Not working for me.
This was a nice change of pace from the previous story...
And I hope the next one is even nicer when Gareth's balls get cut off by Dottie and Andrew... Just saying... ;)
Didn't see that coming! You deserve more than five stars really, REALLY
So there was a gaping possibility.....
Love this series!!!
Gina and Andrew baby announcement!
Please write a story about Gina telling Andrew the news about the new baby. I love that couple. I felt cheated in Chapter 12 - it went too fast. Like it tied up a bunch of loose ends too quickly. Their passion is magnetic. I wanted more! Lol
Very emotional and dramatic, even if Alex's paternity was pretty obvious.
Unfortunately, it appears Ian dying was best for everyone, maybe even Ian. You would think Dessi would have told Rick and Alex about Ian by now, why not? Both men know Rick is not his biodad. I would think Dessi would want Rick and Alex to know that Alex was conceived in love, and that biodad is absent from his life only by accident, not malice or desertion.
And a réal faux pax from Gina, telling anyone before Andrew that she is pregnant is disrespectful and careless. Gina's character is still acting kind of selfish and stupid.
A good read overall. Thank You.
Just didn't get this one
Maybe it's me, but something just didn't work for me in this story. Dessi gave birth to Ian's son, she knew where his parents lived but didn't tell them? For 18 years? No matter that she didn't like them, or that they were so emotionally distant, she should have told them they had a grandson. Then, she tells Gina and it's like, "Oh before you leave, you should know you have a nephew. Have a nice drive home." And how does Gina react? She shares a slightly dirty joke with Dessi and drives off. Not working for me.
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