This is a really good start, i hope there is a part 2. I wanna know more about this Cale, not sure im on his side yet. Navi sounds like a go getter, i can only imagine being a musicians' sidepiece isnt going to go over well with her.
This could be an incredible book, but if you don't expand it into a novel please at least make a part 2. I need to know if Navi shows up and if anything beyond one night of passion happens between them.
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Good story
Good story . Pt 2 please
Good start
This is a really good start, i hope there is a part 2. I wanna know more about this Cale, not sure im on his side yet. Navi sounds like a go getter, i can only imagine being a musicians' sidepiece isnt going to go over well with her.
Good Intro
Yes she is to smart to be a side piece. Like when a girl gets under a "jerks" skin.
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I want more!
Awesome so far
This could be an incredible book, but if you don't expand it into a novel please at least make a part 2. I need to know if Navi shows up and if anything beyond one night of passion happens between them.
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