Too bad you're illiterate!
Among your more blatant grammatical errors - try to remember that students don't "graduate high school or college," they graduate FROM high school or college.
High Schools and/or Colleges graduate their students. (Tough to grasp? I'm not surprised!)
Thank you so much for your feedback, I would correct it if I could, but it's already submitted. While I do admit I made grammatical mistakes in my stories, I can see you don't know the meaning of the word illiterate. You're just some stupid bitch who couldn't point out my grammatical error nicely. I'm not surprised either if you don't get this.
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The makings of a good story are here.
Too bad you're illiterate!
Among your more blatant grammatical errors - try to remember that students don't "graduate high school or college," they graduate FROM high school or college.
High Schools and/or Colleges graduate their students. (Tough to grasp? I'm not surprised!)
worshipper622
Thank you so much for your feedback, I would correct it if I could, but it's already submitted. While I do admit I made grammatical mistakes in my stories, I can see you don't know the meaning of the word illiterate. You're just some stupid bitch who couldn't point out my grammatical error nicely. I'm not surprised either if you don't get this.
Stop!
Grammar is none existent! Learn to read and write then try this again.
Nice
THis story was really good. Some grammar errors, but i was still able to understand it.
Awesome story
Not everyone can do grammar right so screw every one elese I like the story and can't wait to see what you submit next
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