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Higher and Deeper: Emma

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by barepusslover01/02/15

Well Written!

Well written and covered the subject matter. Please continue to submit stories of this quality. Thank you. :-)

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by Anonymous01/02/15

Great read

please write more.

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by Aidily_Emidan01/04/15

More!

Many submissions to this site lack one of the essential elements of storytelling: conflict. Emma's internal dilemma supplies plenty: the good girl who wants to be bad . . . or not . . . depending on her mood. And your dilemma: wanting to fuck her senseless while knowing you can't.

Sounds like you have a brimful reservoir of college sexual experiences. I would enjoy reading more. Please keep writing.

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