A well-earned five from me. Not many Lit tales can tease my finger to that fifth star.
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Anonymous08/08/15
Hot, and beautifully written...
Fabulous. Makes me want to go hang about the local pool hall...
by
Anonymous08/24/15
Can we get an encore
Everything was super on point, I want/need an encore so we can find out what happened in that place before, also so he can put boots to that dumb ass ex of hers. Would love to see a development of courtship...or just plain fucking lol.
English
Excellent
Meant to hit 5 stars, my fingers got the 4 instead. Keep up the good work
Great Story
Very well written. Could have been entered as a Romance Story too. A really good one when enemity turns to love
Absolutely loved this. Very well done.
Nice Job
Very Readable
Love it.
Fun story. I like to call it "Ass Fucking on a Pool Table." :-)
Absolutely delicious.
A well-earned five from me. Not many Lit tales can tease my finger to that fifth star.
Hot, and beautifully written...
Fabulous. Makes me want to go hang about the local pool hall...
Can we get an encore
Everything was super on point, I want/need an encore so we can find out what happened in that place before, also so he can put boots to that dumb ass ex of hers. Would love to see a development of courtship...or just plain fucking lol.
Oh, what a hot little tale this was...
And, knowing he was hustled, it STILL has the potential for another chapter...
Love your writing...
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