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by greenmountaineer01/01/15

I liked the incongruence of human resources with all of its equal opportunity employment rules and regulations and coupling with bayou boys. The way you turned the image of a latex condom from safe sex to a "plastic" relationship, in as few words as you did, is outstanding writing IMO.

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by todski2801/01/15

What g.m said

Interwoven beautifully

You controlled the readers attention on "safe" before putting the word in the piece. To me that imprinting is t he sign of great writing. I 5ed

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