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this is not an open marrriage
to be open, it would have to be discussed and agreed on
no this is just an adulterous, sick, relationship
she does not respect him nor actually care about him
i would highly doubt that there is any true love left for him
maybe some compassion, but no love
dear deadone yourname fits you your brain is dead
this is a story you dim wit, it's not real. So story with your psy babble!! It's fiction NOT REAL!! God get a fucking life
Double standard and hypocrisy
@ bonnyetaylor We wait for your assisting comment that the BTB stories are fiction when the haters bash the BTB stories.
just trying to even the playing field and
help the writer!! and to piss off dear annony and other trolls
interesting fun had by two
I liked the story but trying to figure out how the bosses wife slept through the yelling, screaming orgasms..... Keep up the great work I want to read what happens when Hubby states that he knows of the affair.... :)
To the dumbass pitbull and the other annony assholes
this is a story that means IT"S NOT REAL!! It's made up! It's a fantascy story!! God you are dumb!!!!
Sorry...
Sorry, I don't think your story is about sharing, or even cuckolding, much less "what many will call an open marriage". What this story is about is a wife that at least doesn't respect a little bit her husband of many years. I even suspect she doesn't love him, nor respect their children. But worst than this is him accepting all the cheating, all the humiliation, all the insults his wife produce!!! And it was so easy to go, wake the wife of her boss, and show her how her husband cheated with his wife, and behave for once as a real man...Who knows, maybe his wife would pass to respect him from then on...This story would be very different if her having lovers was a combined scheme with her husband, since their children had grew up left home. But the cheating and the acceptance of this makes it a bad story...
Needed editing
Terrible dialogue and poor grammar.
good permise
the scenario is good and my hubby and I have been there, but the whole dialogue is so unreal and abusive it acts as a turn-off. If my lovers talked that way I'd be back on my way upstairs. the whole treminology you use: "turn my face into a cum dump you fucker" or "he bitch slapped her face" and the reported "GOOOOOOO FUUUUUUCK YEEEES take every fucking drop," simply had me cringing. I got my honey to read it to just to make sure it was not just me and he liked the scenario but was put off by the interchanges as well. He did get a laugh out of the husband standing on the chair in front of the door and coming in his pajamas ( he has been known to spotaneously ejaculate from watching me strip for one of my lovers). As he said, maybe it would have been a great ice breaker if Anne had needed to go for a pee or to get some tissues to wipe her face and opened the door to be faced by her husband's cock spurting in front of her. Just out of interest why did you use the boss got some dicktation in the title? Normally the boss gives dictation.
Just a tip, I find it best to make myself cum before I write the final draft so I don't get too carried away by the story. You will find it helps you view the narrative more objectively and gives you more time to find a more erotic turn of phrase than: "a mixture of fluids ran out down the crack of her arse" might become 'as he eased out of her, I could see how aroused she was from the juices glistening on her labia, which were still gaping from the girth of his enormous thick cock, which was coated with her copious emissions. I could see she was just waiting to welcome his manhood back into her eager opening.'
Anyway good luck with the writing just remember to let the reader use his or her imagination : less is more.
Arty Kay.
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